The Last Day of War

1 day to go, the penultimate day, this is written for every man and woman who gave the ultimate sacrifice for their country in any conflict throughout the world. what else could be better than the day the war ended, I cannot for one moment think how those brave men must have felt, but I have attempted to capture it in my poetry.

“There was no sense of relief, just a sense of quietness, a sense of what would happen if we stepped out of the trench, that same trench where we had been imprisoned for months, it was just so strange to be able to pop my head up above the parapet”

If you want a copy of my book World War One in Verse, please message me.

This is how I imagined it would have been on November 11th at 11am 1918.

The Last Day of War

I recall that day – the eleventh of November,
We were still fighting hard, that’s what I remember,
Our men were still dying we knew nothing of peace,
that within a few hours this damn war would cease.

Pinned down by machine guns and close to a village,
one lone house remained, unaffected by pillage.
When a runner brought news it came as a shock,
that the war would be ended at eleven o clock.

At precisely eleven the bullets just stopped,
then from enemy trenches, an officer popped,
He took off his helmet bowed low to our troops,
Lined up his men – marched away to great whoops.

There was no sense of vengeance, no need to berate,
Though… temptation to shoot them was still very great,
we were just very grateful for the little we’d got
Like standing up straight without getting shot.

It was pure anti-climax, no emotion remained,
four horrifying years and little was gained,
The Allies had victory but at a great cost,
I thought of my comrades – good friends I had lost.

We were all too exhausted, too tired to enjoy,
awaited our orders to perhaps redeploy,
No cheering – no singing, no alcohol at all,
But a time to be thankful – we’d not heard God’s call.

Eric Harvey 07/11/2020

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Hi, I am a grandfather of four beautiful Grandchildren, I have one son and three daughters, We lost Vickie to Cancer in December 2013, she was 23 years old, whoever said time heals haven't lost a child. My profile picture is of Vickie and I haven't changed it since she died, I have a wonderful loving wife without whom I would not have made it through. My escape is writing poetry, I have had five published to date, I now have two books published 'World War One In Verse' is available on Amazon books and 'Poetry From The Heart' is available on Amazon or Feed a Read, just enter the title and my name Eric Harvey. If you love the 50's, 60.s and 70's my new book of poems will take you back to those days, 'A Poetic Trip Along Memory Lane' will jog your memories of bygone days.

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