Tommy

Another very poignant poem written by Teresa Harrison-Best, to commemorate our brave soldiers who fought in World War I  

She wrote this poem to give a face and personality to the Tommy mentioned in the verse. It was such a brutal war and so many lives were lost.

Tommy

They say he was a good man,
with nothing much to say.
A man who loved his family,
with his children he would play.

They say he was hard working
and never missed a day.
He laboured hard from dawn to dusk,
for very little pay.

They say he really liked a pint,
to wash down all the grime.
A swift one on his way back home,
before his dinnertime.

They say he was conscripted,
along with all his mates.
He’d fight for King and Country,
for a shilling a day, his rate.

They say he looked so handsome,
so dapper and so smart.
His wife and kids clung onto him,
before he had part.

They say he sang with all the rest
as they went off to the war.
He didn’t know what lay ahead,
the filth, the cold, the gore.

They say he was both brave and bold,
despite his lack of skill.
A Tommy of Lord Kitchener,
his blood did surely spill.

They say she mourned upon the news,
and clutched her bewildered brood.
Another widow upon that day,
an empty life ensued.

They say he’s now forgotten,
just cold within his grave.
Another poor killed Tommy,
who’s country was then saved.

They say it is too long ago,
there’s nothing now to see.
Just freedom and the right to speak
in a county that is free.

We say they’re not forgotten,
their memory will go on.
We owe it to the fallen,
those Tommy’s who have gone!

About the author

Teresa H-B
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Happily married with three grown up children. Proud grandmother to six and enjoying every minute. I had my first book published several years ago called Catawall, fluent in feline. Recently I had a children's book published, Mackerel and the Jolly Daisy, scourge of the high seas, published by i2i Publishing, I am a prolific writer about many things and often post on both my own FB page and the FB page for Catawall. I am a great advocate for animals and anyone less fortunate than myself.

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